Need feedback on 1'st draft of new logo

[spynet000]

Originally Posted by JoshKaptur

Somfin's not right with that feesh's head.

It has a croaker head! you're right

[Francis]

Thanks guys,

I am bringing this back to our graphic kid. We wanted the logo to be half catoony hence the unrealistin joints on the crab, and weird head on the fish, and the orange rod (who uses those things anyway ) Right now it's like 3/4's realistic and 1/4 cartoony so it makes you go wait it's not perfect. . . I think it needs to be less perfect.

We own the domain www.tightlinesoutfitters.com lines with an "s". www.tightlineoutfitters.com is the one owned by the Colorado company.

It's starting to come together anyway. . .

[ReelSmith]

I like the design and agree with the other comments. Keep it simple, jthe easier to read it and recognize it the better it is.

I'm looking in to doing more of the same for my reel repair business. We'll have to share some notes.